The only thing I have complaints about is Fate having only two lines in the whole thing. Other than that, Nanoha sparkles and she can't control her power.

http://www.mediafire.com/?mzaqrm1mzg3

NOW THIS IS BETTER THAN VIVID.

Thanks for uploading.

well, Fate wasn't much of a talker during the first season era. plus she was practically missing throughout the whole chapter with Nanoha searching for her.

I actually found the link posted by an Anon on nanofate.us. Just wanted to pass it along. :)

Also here are the two color pages from this chapter that an unknown person was kind enough to translate.

>>2
It is better, isn't it? It would be awesome if they made a full series out of this but I can only hope. lol

>>3
Fate isn't much of a talker, anyways. She's a lady of action. =)

>>5

I have to agree with Rin there of how overpowered Magical girls are nowdays, hell most things won't be able to hold a candle to them unless they're super size like a damn mech... then again some of them fall short of been scrap metal against them... anyway moving on swiftly from my ranting...

It would have bene interesting to see a series out of this, but I seriously doubt that we could manage to deal with the major moe been shoved down our throat...

Plus do you really think Illiya would survive any longer if Nanoha was to stay any longer...

Hell Ruby MS thing blew up when it saw Fate so I really don't want to even think what could have happened if they stayed together longer than 24 hours...

Why do I feel that Nanoha would probably become harem mistress without even trying??? lol jk

>>6

It should probably be pointed out that the Servants in FSN are pretty fucking overpowered as well. Being able to run at supersonic speeds, firing projectiles over a mile from a bow, a spear that always hits the heart and never misses, massive weapons stashes, ECKSU-CALIBAAAAHHH capable of wiping out an entire city, and don't get me started on Berserker's absurd haxx (attacks have to exceed a certain power level to hurt him, and even if you kill him he gets 12 lives).

>>5
Now i wish there are SRW-esque Magical crossover game. No, not fighting one, Turn-Based Strategy one.

>>7

Point taken, but then again they're not really alive the servants, they're more akin to Familiars in the sense in that they're not alive without the aid of someone else supplying them with magic.

But that's beside the point really and I did forgot about that... I wonder what will Mazinkaiser has to say about this? jk

>>8

I recall there was something like that somewhere on the net where they pretty much took SRW and stick in the Magical girls, like having Fate and Arf doing old Sanger Zonvolt ultimate move with his partner Elzam von Branstein, I don't know where it is but try looking through Youtube, it's funny as hell.

>>9
I know that vid. Is that from real game or just fan movie?